sysrq868's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Create-A-Ride]

HAHA

Wow, that's a great game.
BTW, my record for the drag strip is 0.501, so beat that.

[RaidenX]

Go(o)d Damn

There's thirteen of these in a dozen, but still this is cool. The only two things bother me in this:
1)downgrading is possible, bad thing
2) you can't destroy the pickups, something
Anydangway, this is the best of it's kind. KUTGW!

[_ULTIMATE TUTORIAL 2_]

Great idea.

Ehm... You called this a tutorial. I would call it a brief how-tos, because the text is like:

"Now I'll teach you blah blah. XD Put a thing in there and then do that and select that and put some align there somewhere and then it looks like this. :o Then select that frame and after that do this and select next frame :-)..."

You don't get a clue.

And try go on less emoticons and smilies, and more... professional text like you would write the text for two bags of flour.

Observe:

"Now you'll learn blah blah. First, draw about .... sized oval and double-click on it to select the fill and the stroke.."

And theitalianblob: where did you get that violence to ten? :D

GAMECUBICLE responds:

I thinks its good when everything is explained with a bit of humour. i dont like it well its all explained very dull... thats boring (thats why i never read the label of a bag of flour) :P

[_ULTIMATE TUTORIAL_]

Okay...

Mm... a spall smelling... erm, small spelling mistake:

"First I'm going to learn you how to..."...

Shouldn't it be

"First I'm going to TEACH you how to..."...

Anyway, great idea, and I love the second version too.

GAMECUBICLE responds:

i know. but you can see i improved my english a lot when you saw the second one. the second one doesnt have that much spelling erors